Learning Goal: I’m working on a communications writing question and need support

Learning Goal: I’m working on a communications writing question and need support to help me learn.Revise the following sentences to emphasize the perspective of the audience and the “you” view. Provide TWO examples for each. 1. To help us process your order with our new database software, we need you to go to
our Web site and fill out the customer information required. 2. Under a new policy, reimbursement of travel expenses will be restricted to those
related to work only. 3. To avoid suffering the kinds of monetary losses experienced in the past, our credit
union now prohibits the cashing of double-endorsed checks presented by our
customers.4. We are pleased to announce an arrangement with HP that allows us to offer
discounted computers in the student bookstore. 5. We are pleased to announce that you have been approved to enroll in our
management trainee program. 6. Our warranty goes into effect only when we have received the product’s registration
card from the purchaser. 7. Unfortunately, the computer and telephone systems will be down Thursday
afternoon for upgrades to improve both systems. 8. As part of our company effort to be friendly to the environment, we are asking all
employees to reduce paper consumption by communicating by e-mail and avoiding
printing.
Requirements: 2 examples for each   |   .doc file

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